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Saturday, 5 June 2010
Writing Tasks - Piece Layout
Read the Question! It will reveal three key things for you:
PURPOSE - Inf/Exp/Des or Arg/Pers/Adv or Ana/Rev/Comm
AUDIENCE - Peers, teachers, parents, public, readers (you'd write very differently if it was your friends than if it was a group of teachers!)
FORMAT - What style are you writing in? Speech, Plain Writing (where it doesn't give you a format), Letter, Article, Talk.
2.
Now plan!
Plan at least FOUR points you will cover - these will be your descriptive paragraphs.
E.g. - "The moon is made of green cheese" Write the words of a speech defending your point of view.
Plan
- Look of the moon
- Cheese chunks falling to earth
- Americans on moon - cheese secrets
- Preserved in space
3.
Introduction
This is where you grab your audience. Try one of these techniques
- Short one/two word sentences (Moon. Cheese. Moon Cheese. These fit together)
- An alternative idea (The moon is just a piece of rock. This might be what you first think but ...)
- Addressing Audience (You may think ...)
- Exaggerated Start (Everyone everywhere eats moon cheese)
- Anecdote (I first had moon cheese when I was ...)
4.
Writing main
Each paragraph should be:
- Descriptive
- Start in an interesting way
- USE A VARIETY OF SENTENCE LENGTHS.
- Have a wide range of punctuation.
5.
Ending
Some techniques to try
- Summarise your points
- Reiterate your point from the introduction
- Moral of the story ... (i.e. what have you learned)
- What you want your audience to do/take away.
6.
CHECK
- Remember you can always:
- Add punctuation
- Alter paragraphs
- Add in extra words/take out useless ones
- Correct spellings
- Re order sentences
(Unfortunately this does mean re-reading your work but that one extra semi-colon/paragraph/descriptive word could make all the difference)
Writing Conventionss
Writing Conventions to Analyse, Review and Comment
| | Analyse Can you consider different viewpoints about an issue? | Review Can you summarise and give your opinion on something? | Comment Can you give your personal response about something? |
| Possible Text Types | q Essays | q Reviews | q Articles q Commentary q Report |
| Word Level | q Present tense q Expressive verbs, e.g. ‘shows’, ‘implies’, ‘exemplifies’, ‘proves’ | q Opinion/Reflection verbs, e.g. ‘believe’, ‘feel’, ‘consider’, ‘suppose’ | q Use of first person to express personal responses q Value judgement adjectives, e.g. ‘convincing’, ‘amusing’ |
| Sentence Level | q Third person to show formality q Conjuncts, e.g. ‘however’, ‘moreover’ q Contrasts, e.g. ‘whereas’, ‘although’ q Cause and Effect, e.g. ‘therefore’, ‘as a result’ | q Use of modal verbs to express assertiveness or tentativeness, e.g. ‘it might be considered that…’ ‘the actors should have…’ | q Use of co-ordination to make propositions q Subordination to discuss and speculate, e.g. ‘if’, ‘whilst’, ‘although’ |
| Text Level | q Statement of issue followed by topic sentences expanded. | q Express personal opinion, give a recommendation or a concluding comment | q Use of rhetorical devices for effect q Statement of issue followed by topic sentences expanded. |
Writing Conventions to Inform, Explain, Describe
| | Inform Can you describe the way things are? | Explain Can you explain how something works / the processes involved? | Describe Can you write about something in a way that makes it real for the reader? |
| Possible Text Types | q Leaflets q Reports/Prospectuses q Eye-witness accounts | q Summaries q Reports q Encyclopaedia entry | q Narrative q Autobiography |
| Word Level | q Technical / specialist vocabulary q Causal connectives | q Connectives - sequence, cause, compare q Technical / specialist vocabulary q Nouns and verbs dominate | q Adjectives q Adverbs |
| Sentence Level | q Present tense q Formal q Simple and compound sentences q Clear topic sentences | q Third person q Tense as appropriate q Mostly active voice | q Varied sentence length as appropriate q Choice of person and tense as appropriate |
| Text Level | q Bullet points q Headings and subheadings q Tables /Text/Diagrams q Paragraphs likely to be organised by topic | q Diagrams and illustrations q Paragraphs open with a general statement followed by evidence q Sequential / logical order | q Likely to appeal to the reader’s senses |
Writing Conventions to Argue, Persuade, Advise
| | Argue Can you argue the case for a point of view? | Persuade Can you make people do or buy something? | Advise Can you tell someone to do something? |
| Possible Text Types | q Pamphlets q Newspaper articles | q Leaflets/Posters and Letters q Speeches | q Recipes q Manuals |
| Word Level | q Judgmental/Emotive language, e.g. ‘outrageous’, ‘disgraceful’ or ‘unbelievable’ | q Emphatic Language, e.g. ‘Of course’, ‘Naturally’, ‘Obviously’ q Emotive Language ‘Distressing’, ‘Devastating’, ‘Amazing’ | q Imperative verbs, e.g. ‘Put’, ‘Grate’ q Prepositional phrases, e.g. ‘Above your head’, ‘Under your seat’ |
| Sentence Level | q Variety of sentence lengths q Diplomatic, no blame q Subordinating clauses, e.g. ‘if’, or ‘because’ q Sequential connectives, e.g. ‘First’, ‘Secondly’ | q Use of second person (you) to personalise effect q Short punchy sentences for impact q Rhetorical questions | q Active sentences q Use of colon prior to lists q Use of second person q Sequential connectives, e.g. ‘Firstly’ |
| Text Level | q Begins with a powerful statement about position followed by topic sentences with supporting points via PEEL q Clear summary and dramatic final statement for impact. q Sustained point of view for the reader | q Statement q Argument q Elaboration q Reiteration q Summary q Conclusion | q Sequential q Clear unfussy central layout q Easy to scan for next instruction |
Sunday, 22 November 2009
Punctuation: Websites that Can Show you How
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/cgi-shl/quiz.pl/punct_quiz.htm